Chibi Commission 05_Lazeros_2

I liked 04_Lazeros_1 a lot better. (I'll write a critique for that after this one.) The brown's body seems a little too stiff and rigid for some reason; i can't figure out exactly why, though. I really love the shading style and how you just use lines and shadow edges to show fur instead of being incredibly intricate/detailed. The fact that this particular one has no real background bothers me, 04_Lazeros_1 at least had a white border. It looks too floaty, maybe you just add a bit of shadow to anchor the characters down to the picture. I also think the halos should have lines; you can't really tell what they are as presented, and its hard to even see them because they're on the yellow portion of the background and are yellow themselves. The halos also look out of place because they're the only things on the characters without lines besides fur pattern changes. Other than that it's very cute and original and i like how soft and furry they look.